Thursday, November 13, 2014

The Portfolio Plan


The Portfolio Plan


1.       Something that I have to change in my research paper is the use of “you,” this essay is more professional than other essays that we have done in the past and the use of the word "you" does not sound proffesionl in this essay A second thing that I have to change in my essay is support examples. My argument is good but I need more examples to support my argument. I will try to look for examples that support and clarify my argument.

2.       I still have to do this.

3.       The essay that I will be choosing to add to the portfolio will be the Exemplification essay. I think that this has been one of my best essays and I feel confident about putting this essay in the Portfolio.
Crstina Aguirre

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